Here is Beta 1.0 of part 3. Again, C & C for this please....!
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Bile studio presents,
Personalities 3: Mousse's story.
Jang Choe
Mousse: (Narrating) Nihao ma, my name is Mousse. I've been
married to the most beautiful woman in Nerima, Tendo Kasumi for
four and a half years. I am still blind, but I've gotten used to
it. We're now going to Gosenkugi Hikaru's hideout. If you don't
know already, Ranma's wife Akane was kidnapped by Gos. Along the
way, we managed to get Kunou, Kodachi, Ukyo, and Ryouga to come
along. Shampoo just followed me here. Anyway, after I was
engaged to Kasumi, I immediately quit my job at that hell hole,
Nekohaten. Of course after Kasumi and I became married, I needed
to get a job. Well, Ukyo, being nice as she was, gave me a job
at Uuchans. Actually, I own the place now. Ukyo taught me how
to cook okonimiyaki and with Kasumi's help, they are better than
before. Even better than Ukyo's maybe. Ukyo? well, she now
works for me. Since her husband is a successful doctor, she
really doesn't have to work at all. But she still enjoys making
okiminiyaki.
Ryouga: Why are you telling me this? And it's...
Mousse: (Adjusting his glasses) Huhn? I thought I was talking to
the readers.
Ryouga: You mean them? (Ryouga points at you) Well,
(Narrating) I've been wandering around somewhere and
suddenly Ranma and Mousse appeared and wanted me to help them
save Akane. Of course, since Akane was my dear childhood friend,
I needed to help her.. so I went along with them. Also..
Mousse: Ryouga, this story is called Personalities 3: MOUSSES'S
story. Okay?
Ryouga: (Ignoring Mousse)...Ukyo later joined us. Then Kunou
thought he needed to save his wife's sister so he also went with
us...
Mousse: (To you) Ignore him kids. Well, this is where Gosenkugi
lives.
[Mousse looks at the ______ (fill in the blank with your own
answer. Remember, Mousse is blind you know, so it really isn't
Gos's hideout he's looking at.)]
Ranma: No Mousse, this is not his house. (Points at the ______
Mousse is looking at.)
Mousse: (Raises glasses slightly) Yeah, um I see now.
[A few minutes later, the group finally arrives at
Gos's hideout.]
Gos: (Narrating) Now.. Ohhhhh here they come now. This will be
fun to watch. (Gosenkugi sees them coming. We see Ryouga,
Shampoo, Ukyo, Mousse, Kodachi, Kuno, and of course Ranma)
Ranma: We finally made it. (looks around and sees the big sign
that says Gosenkugi Hikaru's House) I guess he was expecting
us.
Gos: (Through a loud speaker) Hello my friends, I see you guys
have come for Akane. Well, it won't be easy. I hope you guys
luck.
Ranma: (Pulling up sleeve) I don't need no stinking luck. (this
phrase is from "The Magnificent Seven." Coincidentally, there
are seven of them. Ohhhh... eerie.)
Ryouga: Gosenkugi!!! why don't you give up and just give Ranma
Akane back.
Gos: What if I don't??!
Ryouga: Well, uh...
Ranma: (Pushes Ryouga away.) You know we'll eventually get to
you. When we do, you will be nothing more than... more than..
hmmm... forgot which metaphors I was gonna use.
Gos: (Thinks for a second) You know, you're right. (goes out to
meet them) Ranma!! ( goes and hugs Ranma's legs) I'm sorry,
please don't hurt me.
Ranma: Well, that was easy.
[All of a sudden, a blue gas appears and knocks everyone out
except for Gos.]
Gos: Well, THAT was easy, ha ha ahhhh. (Gos tries feebly to
carry/ drag the bodies inside his house.)
Gos: (Panting, out of breath) Man!! these guys are heavy.
[29 minutes later, we still see Gos trying to drag the
bodies into his house.]
Gos: (Looks at his watch) Oh no! one more minute and they will
be awake. (all of a sudden, Ranma wakes up. Then the rest
follows. Gos sees that and his eyes bug out and puts his hands
on his cheeks.) Oh no! (Takes out a doll and sprays everybody
with it and soon they fall asleep.) Phew, that was close.
Wait, why didn't I think of this earlier. (A big mechanical doll
comes out and carries the gang to Gos's house)
Gos: (To Ranma) Waky wakey (slaps Ranma and pours cold water on
him)
Ranma: Ahhhhhhh!! Gos!! ugg, (sees that he and his friends
tied up) Untie us!
Gos: No No, no can do.
Kuno: Ug prithee ug, (shakes head) Huhn? Curse you voodoo
man!
untie us from this bondage. (looks at Ranma) Pig tailed girl!
Oh how it enrages me to see an innocent woman like you to be in
yolk!
Ranma: Yea right, pervert. Oh and what would Nabiki say if she
saw you flirting with me?
Kuno: I, Tatewaki Kuno, doth not worry about petty matters as
those. For all I needst to do is give her a gift of all gifts
and she will forgive my actions still.
Ryouga: (Waking up) Huhh? You! what have you done to Akane?
Gos: Ok, look over there (points at the living room. On the
couch sits Akane watching TV) see, nothing done to her. I just
want her to be near me, to... speak to me.
Ranma: Stop torturing her!
Gos: I never did such a thing.
Ranma: Oh? then why are you making her watch Viz's Maison
Ikkoku?
Ryouga: (Shocked) Dear God no.
Ranma: Gosenkugi! you have gone too far!!
Gos: I thought she was watching Sailor Moon!
Ranma: (Breaks the ropes and grabs Gos by the collar; shoves
Gos's face to the TV) That's just as bad!!! And Sailor Moon
doesn't come on till in about an hour.
Gos: I remember, I was showing her a tape, and Viz's Maison
Ikkoku musta have gotten in the VCR by accident.
Ranma: Oh, well that still don't excuse you for what your
doing!! Hirryuu Shoten Haaa!! (The force of the Hiryuu Shoten
Ha blasts Gos and his house
into the stratasmosphere.)
[After a few minutes, Gos lands hard on the ground in his
little pose.]
Gos: (Wakes up, takes out a huge nail and hammer and charges at
Ranma) My
house!!!! (However, Gos just passes Ranma and starts rebuilding
his
house with incredible speed)
Ranma: Ok Gos, turn Akane back to normal.
Gos: I... I.. don't know how. (shrinks)
Ranma: What?! (All of a sudden Akane snaps into reality.)
Akane: What the heck is this? Why does Yotsuya sound so
stupid!! Not to mention Kyoko. (goes to Gosenkugi) Gos,
Gos: (Blushes) y.. yes?
Akane: I just want to say..
Gos: Y- yea?
Akane: I am very pissed off of you ordering me around!!! hiryuu
Shoten Ha!!!
Gos: Not again!!! Ahhhhheeeeee....(flies off)
Akane: Ranma, thanks for teaching me that move.
Ranma: No prob. So, you knew what was going on?
Akane: Yea, I was completely aware of my surroundings, except
every time I heard his voice, I had to do what he said. It was
weird.
Kuno: What? you are called "Ranma" pig tailed one?
Ranma: Kuno, time to know the truth, (all of a sudden a kettle
of boiling water appears and he pours it on himself)
Kuno: Gakkkk!! you fiend! how dare thee disguise thyself as
the fair pigtailed girl. What have thee done to my fair
goddess!?
Ranma: (Sigh) Forget it, lets go Akane.
Ryouga: (To Mousse and Ukyo) Gee, we were a lot of help.
Gos: (lands on the ground again in a weird position) Ooff,
sigh, that's what I get trying to force people to be my friends.
I guess I will always be living alone, no female companionship or
anything.
Mousse: (Ignoring what Gos said) Hey, where did Shampoo go? Oh
well, who cares, at least she is away from me.
Ryouga: Oh Akari, where are you?
Ukyo: Hmmmm, I wonder if Tofu-san is cooking tonight. Ug, I
hope not, all he knows how to cook is Tofu.
[Everybody leaves. Mousse, Akane, and Ranma goes to their
houses]
Mousse: Kasumi, We're home!
[They all see Soun sitting on the floor looking real bad and
crying.]
Soun: Nii... nii... sora... sora.. the... moon.. is rising.
over.. my eye.. (Or something like that -JWC)
Ranma: Oh no! Something is wrong if he's like this.
Akane: This might mean either Nabiki or Kasumi has disappeared!
Nabiki: You're right Akane, Shampoo kidnapped her.
Akane: Nabiki? You saw what happened?
Nabiki: Yup, now for that information, it will be 1000 yen.
Mousse: Shampoo!? (grits teeth) Why that little. (Grabs
Nabiki) where did she take Kasumi?!
Nabiki: Oh, I don't know, but some money might bring back my
memory.
Akane: Nabiki! Kasumi is our sister! and she's been kidnapped by
some crazed Amazon woman.
Mousse: (Takes out a blade with 6 prongs) You tell me where
Shampoo and Kasumi went, or else I'll pry open that head of yours
and find out myself!
Ranma: Mousse! Stop, she doesn't know where Shampoo went.
Nabiki: (Not a bit worried) Don't hurt me Mousse. If you do...
Oh, Kuno baby!
[All of a sudden Kunou leaps out of nowhere and lands next
to Nabiki and Mousse]
Ranma & Akane: Kuno!
Kuno: My lady beckons so I come. (Looks what Mousse) Huh?
Cursed dog!! How dare you attack the sweet flower Nabiki
Tendo?!! Prepare to die fiend!! Tembatsuuuuuu..
dadadadadadadadDADADADDADADADADADADADADADADA!!! (Strikes the
bokken wildly at Mousse)
Akane: Stop this!! You guys are acting like a bunch of
teenagers!!
[After Akane said that line, Mousse already has Kunou
wrapped up in chains and a spear aimed at Kunou's neck.]
Mousse: You've gotten slow Kunou. I guess this greedy whore
doesn't make you practice.
Akane: (Punches Mousse and he flies away and hits the wall with
much impact.) Don't you call my sister a WHORE!!
Mousse: (Coming out of that devil pose) Ok, ok. I'm sorry Akane.
But didn't your father ever teach you girls any manners?
Akane: Actually, our father couldn't really do anything after
our mother died. As we grew up, we just went our separate ways.
Since Kasumi was the oldest, she decided to do the motherly
chores. Nabiki somehow brought in our income, and I.. I just
didn't do anything. (A tear flows out of her eye) I was
useless. I remember how Kasumi took care of us when our mother
died. It was almost like having another mother.
Ranma: I'm just wondering, what was Kasumi like before your
mother died?
Akane: She was not much different.
Mousse: She told me that she was a black belt in the anything
goes martial arts.
Akane: Wait a minute, you're right, she was! She was very good.
She might have been better than you Ranma, if she continued.
Ranma: No way.
Akane: I remember now. I can feel it was yesterday.
*flashback*
[We see a young Kasumi and Akane. Kinda super deformed.]
Kasumi: Akane?
Akane: Yes, older sister?
Kasumi: I know that it's been hard without mother. It's been
only a week now.
Akane: I know, daddy's been crying since.
Kasumi: Akane, as much as I love the martial arts, I love my
family more. So I decided to tell father that I will take care
of the motherly duties.
Akane: You will?
Kasumi: Yes, but I want you to train for me. We cannot just let
our style fade away. Our father has no other students besides
me. I want you to train. That way when you grow up, you can
carry on the dojo and spread our style around the world.
Akane: But what about you?
Kasumi: I told you, I need to take care of our family,
especially father; he looks so terrible.
Akane: Okay, big sister.
Kasumi: You promise to train hard for me.
Akane: I promise
[Kasumi and Akane crosses their pinkies.]
*flashback ends*
Ranma: So it was Kasumi that made you into that tomboy.
Akane: Ranma!!!! (Punches Ranma through a wall) I hate him!!
Ranma's always so insensitive!!! Now, we must find
her. Come on Mousse. (Hold's Mousse's arm very tightly and
drags him.)
Mousse: Ow ow, Akane, we don't know where to start.
Akane: Sorry, (Lets him go) Now where can we start looking?
(Looks around)
[Akane looks around but all of a sudden, Mousse disappeared.
All She sees is Kunou and Nabiki sitting on the ground looking
shocked.]
Akane: Nabiki! Are you all right? (Shakes Nabiki)
Ranma: Mousse beat up Kunou and threatened Nabiki while you were
looking around.
-----cut to Mousse----
Mousse: There, Nekohaten. (Grabs some guy from the streets.)
Hey, does that sign say "Nekohaten?" (Points at a building)
Guy: No, it doesn't say Nekohaten, but the building next to it
does.
Mousse: Thanks. Shampoo, you will dearly pay for kidnapping my
beloved Kasumi! (Breaks through the door of Nekohaten.)
Cologne. Well, well, son-in-law. You finally showed up. It's
about time. I thought you were going to disappointed me.
Mousse: Where's Kasumi?
Cologne: No nonsense, straight to the point, That's the quality
I'm looking for in a good son-in-law.
Mousse: Shut up you hag! (Thrusts his sleeve which three hooked
ropes come shooting out.)
[Cologne, experienced as she is, safely leaps out of the
way.]
Cologne: Har har, if you really want to see your wife, then you
have to fight for it.
Mousse: No problem.
Cologne: Lin Lin, Ran Ran! Come and teach my son in law a lesson
in Amazonian laws!
Lin-Lin & Ran-Ran: All right!
[They fight but it doesn't last long because Ranma came in a
nick of time to help Mousse. Mousse and Ranma however have a
tough time fighting them, but they win.]
Ranma: Look, there's Kasumi! (Runs towards her but all of a
sudden Shampoo comes out and throws a dart at Ranma which he
barely dodges but the dart manages to cut his face.)
[Mousse grabs Shampoo and pushes here aside and runs toward
Kasumi. Mousse unties Kasumi and waits for her to wake up, but
she does not. So Mousse shakes her violently.]
Ranma: Mousse! (Stops Mousse.) What are you doing?
Mousse: I'm trying to wake her up!
Ranma: Well, it seems that you were trying to shake her to
death. She's not a milkshake you know!!
Mousse: This is no time for jokes, Ranma. My wife is
unconscious.
[Slowly, Kasumi somehow awakens. Mousse notice and goes
towards Kasumi relieved.]
Mousse: Kasumi, you are now safe. (hugs her)
Kasumi: What are you talking about Mousse?
Mousse: (Gets up and angrily points at Shampoo) Shampoo! How
dare
you do that to her! I told you to leave us alone! I already
told you that I don't want to be your husband!
Shampoo: Ok Mousse, I give you chance to get out of this. The
only way... is to fight me to death.
Mousse: What? Ok, sure, to death huh? Shampoo... Oh right, I
shall then fight you.
Kasumi: (Holds Mousse back.) No, Mousse.
Mousse: I must, I have... we have no choice.
Ranma: Kasumi, let him do what he must.
Kasumi: Huh? Ranma, where did you come from? Your face.
(feels the cut) and you're bruised.
Ranma: Oh it's nothing, come on lets move away before you get
hurt.
Kasumi: No, I don't want my husband to kill anyone.
Ranma: You don't understand Kasumi, a martial artist...
Kasumi: ... Needs to think about his actions. The martial artist
must use his skills for the benefit of others. A true warrior
does not seek fights.
Ranma: (feeling trapped) Yyyeaaahh, and now Mousse is thinking
about killing
Shampoo.
Kasumi: Mousse didn't think about anything, his emotions are
taking over.
Ranma: Look, Mousse was my opponent for many years. I know how
my opponent thinks.
Kasumi: Yes, but I was married to him for four years.
[Ranma and Kasumi continues arguing while we see Shampoo and
Mousse are talking.]
Shampoo: (Mandarin) Mousse, I know you won't kill me, remember
ten years ago? Remember how you loved me back then? Well, I
know that feeling is still inside you Mousse.
Mousse: We shall see. (Gets ready to fight) (thinking) I Can't
kill her, Kasumi won't allow it. What do I do? Wait, I know!
All I need to do is let her win. Yes, if she defeated me, I am
no longer worthy of marrying her.
Shampoo: Oh, the law of Amazon says that I still need to marry
you even if I defeat you. Once a Chinese man defeats an Amazon,
he is hers forever till death. So don't lose on purpose and
think you'll get rid of me.
Mousse: (Realizes that wouldn't work) Ooookayyy.. (looks at
Kasumi, she is still arguing with Ranma. Mousse finally decides
what to do.) Forgive me Kasumi, I must do what I have to do.
(Faces toward Shampoo, although Shampoo IS slightly more to his
right.) Shampoo!! PREPARE TO DIEEE!!! (Charges towards her.)
Shampoo: (Thinking) I enjoy this, I either die in my lover's
arms or I marry him.
[Mousse charges at Shampoo and does a jump front kick at
her. Shampoo dodges that and punches Mousse; Mousse however
blocks that and counterattacks with a wicked ox-fist to her
abdominal region. Shampoo is stunned but not hurt by that
attack, jump kicks Mousse in the chest and punches him in the
stomach. Mousse gets up slowly and throws his chains at her,
they barely miss but one lodges in her arm. Shampoo screams in
pain from the sharp, cold blade that is stuck in her arm. This
give Mousse a chance to sweep her and he immediately goes on top
of Shampoo and grabs her throat. Then he punches, kicks,
punches, chops, punches, punches, punches, knees, elbows,
headbutts, punches, ridge hands, hammer fists, punches, punches,
and punches her. Blood is flying everywhere as Mousse is beating
Shampoo to death. Mousse's blind eyes are filled with hatred.]
------flashback------
[Mousse and Shampoo are both 3 years old.]
Mousse: Shampoo me want marry you.
Shampoo: Great Grandmother say me can't till someone defeats me.
Mousse: Ok, me will defeat you yaaaa (runs toward Shampoo.)
[Shampoo just sticks her foot out and Mousse runs into the
foot and does a 360 turn in the air.]
Mousse: Ow!!!! (cries) Waaaaaa!!! :(
Shampoo: Me win Me win.
Cologne: Shampoo, I told you not to play with that pathetic
little brat. Come on.
Shampoo: Ok great grandma.
[Shampoo and Mousse are both 16 years old.]
[It is raining and Shampoo has her head stuck up as Mousse
tries hard to catch up with her]
Mousse: Shampoo, why won't you go out with me?
Shampoo: Shampoo busy delivering food now.
Mousse: Oh, Okay, how about after?
Shampoo: No, Shampoo date Ranma
Mousse: Shampooooo~~~.
[Another scene where they are 16 years old. This is the
scene where Ranma first meets Mousse.]
Mousse: Ranma, if I defeat you..
Cologne: You can't have Shampoo..
Mousse: Uh yea..
[Another scene.. ]
Mousse: Looks like I hit the jackpot.. (raises glasses)
Bird Man: So your strongman comes.
Shampoo: No, he not the right one!
Mousse: Don't worry Shampoo, I'll save you.
Shampoo: No Mousse, you no have to.
[Bird man and Mousse start fighting.]
Shampoo: Shampoo don't care who wins.
[More flashbacks that show's Mousse's failures with Shampoo]
-----end of flashback------
Kasumi: (Surprisingly angry) Stop this!!!!
Mousse: (Stops and calms down. Looks at the bloody mess of
Shampoo he created.)
No, (frightened) no, what has come over me?? (Kneels down) I
turned into a killer. I almost reduced myself to Shampoo's
level. I almost turned into a murderous, revengeful Amazon.
(Cries)
Kasumi: Mousse, what has gone over you? What if Mokumo saw
what his father did? I.. I..
Mousse: I'm sorry Kasumi, they were hurting you.
Kasumi: They never hurt me, Mousse. Shampoo was better off then
you. You didn't almost turn into a murderous, revengeful Amazon!
You are one! Mousse, goodbye, you frighten me. I don't want a
violent father for Mokumo. I don't want him to be like you.
Mousse: Kasumi! I did this because I love you... how can you
take Shampoo's side?
Kasumi: Goodbye Mousse. I thought I would never leave you. I
thought you were the sweetest man ever lived. But I guess I was
wrong. (Leaves)
Ranma: Oh crap. Look Mousse, I'm sorry. I'll talk to her,
Call doctor Tofu, lets take Shampoo to the hospital.
Cologne: You don't have to ex-son-in-law. I shall handle this.
(to Mousse) Son-in- law, we succeeded did we not? We took
Kasumi away from you. Now Kasumi despises you. How
unfortunate, now you are free to marry Shampoo.
Ranma: You still are scum, Cologne. I should finish you now!
Mousse: (Holding Ranma back) Forget it Ranma, it's all over for
me. Tell Kasumi and Mokumo goodbye for me.
Cologne: Ha ha, I knew you would come back for Shampoo.
Mousse: I never said I will. I'm going back to China, I will go
back to my village and live there.
Ranma: Oh, come on Mousse, you're not really going to...
Mousse: I'm serious, good bye. (Heads out the door.)
Ranma: Wait!! Mousse, Akane and I can talk to Kasumi, you guys
can still be together again. Kasumi always forgives.
Mousse: No thanks Ranma, love never agrees with me.
I will always love but never be loved back. Fate gave me an
opportunity to be loved, but I blew it. It's my fault that I
lost Kasumi. I shouldn't have tried to kill Shampoo. (Wipes
tears) Ranma, once again tell everyone goodbye for me. (Head out
the door of the broken, blood stained Nekohaten.)
-Fin
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Well, that's it. The end of Personalities. If you are reading
this the first time, you probably have no clue on what's going
on. If you really want to find out, read Personalties 1 and
Personalties 2. Try to read them in chronological order. There
should be a sequel to this by the time your through reading this.
It's called Personalities too. Each story will be based on two
perspectives. It will deal with the couples: Mousse and Kasumi,
Ranma and Akane, and Ukyo and Ono. Also, if you're still
confused, or want more (Yeah, right) go read the Personalities
FAQ. Well, send all flames to Piccolo@cyber.atlanta.com