Eric  Jones postulated:

So for now, here's what the next installation of HHGTR looks like...

In the beginning, reality was created.  This made a lot of people very

[...]

I absolutely love this!  All of it.  Write more!  Don't let hat silly
mono stop you... 

And now I'll point out one or two grammer things I noticed, just to be
helpful as well as spouting priase..  ^_^;

Soun Tendou watched the two men carefully.  By now, he had gotten quite
used to seeing people falling into his koi pond - much to the chagrin
of the koi that actually swam in it -, but he was used to knowing who

                                      ^^^
No comma needed there...

Arthur had one of his many bad thoughts, and turned to Ford quickly.
"Look, we can understand them, because of the babel fish, but will they
understand us?"
"It should.  I managed to get all around your planet without a hitch.

   ^^^^^^^^^
It sounds like this should be 'They should.'

Soun kept a friendly expression on his face.  �Well, don�t be too
impressed by our..  Pet here.  He cheats.�
Genma growfed at that comment, too busy glaring at Soun to notice while
Ford switched the board around.  Genma looked back at his pieces, a
little confused at how much he had to change his tactics.  Too many
distractions today, he guessed.

ROFL! ^_^

Unfortunately, the project had been doomed to failure, and the only
version of the HitchHiker's Guide to Reality had laid in a solitary
room, all alone, simply sitting and collecting dust.  Until that is, a
certain Ford Prefect picked it up, thinking it might be kind of neat.

It didn't seem like you ever really explained why the new Guide wasn't used,
other than the fact that a few reality researchers died making it...

Anyways, keep this up!  'tis most fun. ^_^


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