When I first posted my attempt at a lemon, "Needs and Desires", the
response was resounding silence.  Well, that's not true; I did get a few
thoughtful responses.  But not nearly as much as I usually get, which
makes me believe that the story wasn't good.  Plus I managed to offend
Kun-chan in the process.  So it was my plan to never work on it again,
and to move on to other things.

Well I agree with another poster, It was a good story and a good lemon.  Few
can do both.  I also liked the realism in that Kuno's and Nabiki's (or any
other characters for that matter) "first" was not the super bells and
wistles, we are just natural experts, that many other lemons have shown.

Keep it, show it, heck post it on the revived RAAC as well as the web site.
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Ben L. Harrison - HM1(FMF)/USN/RET
Harriso3@ix.netcom.com
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Anime Excuse #219 Akane made my lunch
Anime Excuse #220 Kodatchi took a shine to me
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"It wasn't our fault!!" -- The Lovely Angels, any post mission brief