On Tue, 13 Aug 1996, Zen wrote:
Zen likes the new material, Sebastian-san!
Thanks, Zen. I thought you would. :)
Well, that's it fo the second Volume. I've got things planned for
at least two more Volumes, although I'm not always 100% sure of
the order in which storylines will appear. I *guess* the next
volume will mark the appearance of Saotome Nodoka, as well as the
Golden Pair of martial arts skating. As always, past parts are
available for download on my web-pages in HTML or plain text
Ukyou. Ukyou. <prod prod> ^_^
Nope. The next Volume will be entitled "Mothers" and contain mainly two
storylines dealing with Nodoka and one with the Golden Pair in the middle.
Ukyou will turn up in Volume 4 that will *probably* be called "Fiances"
C&C is *highly* appreciated, particularly the pointing out of
grammatical errors or misconstructions (That's one thing the
spellchecker doesn't catch. :)
The polish on this one looked pretty good...
Thanks, but everytime I edit my stories, I catch some pretty strange
phrasings that just don't work in english. If somebody sees one of those
germanisms that escaped me, I'd like to be notified.
On the whole, a nice job! Zen likes the material that you added since teh
last draft he saw... Kunous refusal to tag his "pig tailed goddess" was
interesting, though it would have been fun to see the one mind/one body
line worked in,
Uh, which line would that be, and where's it from?
Zen is still waiting for Ukyou!
Yes!! You *said* so, *already*! :)
(Gomen ne; Zen is a nag, he knows. Please forgive him. He is just over
enthusiastic about the potentials inherent in the Ukyou character with the
situation as you have it set up!) ^_^
I am, too, but It'll *still* have to wait until the appropriate time.
Sebastian