Zen likes the new material, Sebastian-san!

To be continued...

Well, that's it fo the second Volume.  I've got things planned for
at least two more Volumes, although I'm not always 100% sure of
the order in which storylines will appear.  I *guess* the next
volume will mark the appearance of Saotome Nodoka, as well as the
Golden Pair of martial arts skating.  As always, past parts are
available for download on my web-pages in HTML or plain text

Ukyou.  Ukyou.  <prod prod> ^_^

C&C is *highly* appreciated, particularly the pointing out of
grammatical errors or misconstructions (That's one thing the
spellchecker doesn't catch. :)

The polish on this one looked pretty good...


On the whole, a nice job!  Zen likes the material that you added since teh
last draft he saw... Kunous refusal to tag his "pig tailed goddess" was
interesting, though it would have been fun to see the one mind/one body
line worked in, Zen does not see how it could have been done.  Your take on
the situation should take it in interesting directions!

Zen is still waiting for Ukyou!

(Gomen ne; Zen is a nag, he knows.  Please forgive him.  He is just over
enthusiastic about the potentials inherent in the Ukyou character with the
situation as you have it set up!) ^_^

Zen hopw that you will have more spare time to write soon!

Ja na

Zen-

(Please note new e-mail addy)


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