I read this series and I enjoyed it up until this part. Somehow I think

you  

made the ending a bit too abrupt. You also completely went against the  
Akane/Ranma relationship with chapter 8. You said yourself that Ranma

loved  

Akane and then had him simply accept Perfume when he should have at least 

tried to explain to Akane. 

 
True enough, although, he didn't SIMPLY accept Perfume.  That decision was
forced on him.  As for explaining...well, have *you* ever tried to explain
something like that to an irate tomboy, if you were in Ranma's
position...look at what happened when she saw him and Shampoo in the tub
together. 
 

Overall I think the series was O.K. where it would have been good if you  
hadn't just 'slapped' the ending in there. 

 
Sorry about that.  I guess the time for an ending just came and that was
that... 
 

(It's not too late, say that this was a 'test' ending and make the real

one  

real quick, nobody will hurt you...badly.) 

 
HA!  No, actually, I'm quite pleased with it...sudden ending and all. 
 

PS If you think I am trashing your work, you will have your chance for

revenge  

when I release a BGC fanfic I'm currently working on. (I will post an 'ad'

for  

it sometime soon, to see if people hate my basic idea :) 

 
I don't think you're trashing my work.  I enjoy C & C. 
-- 
 
Oni a.k.a. Greg Thompson <AkoMagami@usa.pipeline.com> 
 
Member, Red-Head Anime Girls Fan Club 
Co-Founder and High Priest of The Holy Order of A-ko 
            -----Folder of the Holy Fuku----- 
Co-author of Project A-ko:  The College Years