Liked it. :) A different spin on the "Nabiki-as-bitter-provider" idea
than I used in Silent Partner, with a more intelligent Ranma and less
perceptive Nabiki. 
   Was Ranma awake the whole time? The end dialogue seemed to indicate
that he was, but I can't see him "pretending" to be attracted to Akane,
considering the size of the mental block he has on that.
   Enjoyed the portrayal of Nabiki. :)

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