JUNK
by Jeff Rutsch
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 7  The first person perspective was good.
*Characters: 7  It seemed though, the monolougs were rushed.
*Lemon: 1
*Overall: 6 It went too fast.  Jeff did do a good job summarizing 24 hours in a few pages though.  What was that last bondage scene about?  A suprise ending? This story is weirder than PhoneyNT's.

SOUR MILK SEA
by Jeff Rutsch
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 8 it reminded me of Pulp Fiction. :)
*Characters: 7 Again with the rushed first person perspective style.
*Humor: 4  there was a funny part.
*Lemon: 2
*Overall: 7.5  I actually like this story.  One thing, Jeff Rutch definatly beats out Stefan in Quintin Tarontinoness.

TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHS PT 1-4
by Jeff Rutsch
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 7  Oy, this is weird
*Characters: 7
*Humor 6  Man that Part 4 was funny!!!! hahahahahahahhaha!
*Lemon: 2
*Overall: 7  you have a good mind Jeff.  I guess normal for you is funny to me.  One problem with this is that you changed from first person to third person.

REVOLUTION
by Jeff Rutsch
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 7
*Characters: 7
*Overall: 7  One thing I like about Jeff's stories:  easy to read and short.  And amusing.

SHADOWS OF THE MASTERS
by Stephan Bennet
Grammar: 7
Story: 8  I think, with my knowledge of Macross(Robotech), this happens before the first Macross saga.  Or I can be wrong.
Characters: 7 
Overall: 6.8  It got confusing but cleared up a little in the end.

KEICHII'S BLOODY SUNDAY
by dnab
Grammar: 8
Story: 8
Characters: 8
Humor: 6
Lemon: 5
Overall: 8  One of the better OMG fanfic I read... and it's a lemon.  What's the world coming to?

REVOLUTION #9
by Jeff Rutsch
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 7.1 interesting...
*Characters: 7  interesting way of handling the characters.
*Lemon: 3
*Overall: 7.4 maybe the more of Jeff's stories I read, the more I get used to them.   Oh, more drug use and sex... :)


Oh, a quick note, you know the last review I sent had this fic I reviewed called "Obsession"?  Well, I wrote that and I was testing if anyone noticed... hmmm nobody did.  I guess you don't read this or you really don't care or both.