yinyang wrote:

SHADOWS OF THE MASTERS
by Stephan Bennet
Grammar: 7
Story: 8  I think, with my knowledge of Macross(Robotech), this happens before the 
first Macross saga.  Or I can be wrong.

No.  You're right.  That was the battle which brought everything that followed.  It was 
what toppled the Robotech Master's empire, brought into ascendancy the Invid, and 
involved Earth

Characters: 7
Overall: 6.8  It got confusing but cleared up a little in the end. 

I understand completely.  This was an utterly rought draft.  It has not been revised 
*once* since the initial penning.  I will probably revise what I have after I finish 
with chapter three (since they are very much linked at the hip and all--for the most 
part--introduce the main characters


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