Ranma al'Thor wrote:
Grr, I want to be more helpful, but I can't. Just write it,
dang it! If you can bring all the plot elements together
without getting bogged down in heavy dialogue, and with just
the right touch of humor, this will be a good story - certainly
better than "Nail". Go at it, and write write write!
John biiidas Richard :)
D'oh! I didn't mean that the way it sounded! "Nail" is certainly one
of the better fanfics out there. The one major logical inconsistency
spoiled it for me. If #5 can avoid the same logical problems, it'll be
a great story. That's all I meant.
I didn't mean no disrespect, JW. I still rate DnR #15 as one of my
all-time favorites.