In case anyone's interested, the title of the story I posted is
"FF", I'm sure it stands for something but FF is all I can remember.  Moot
point I suppose, it's slated for the shredder due to complete lack of
interest.
        Since I don't like to waste mails anymore than I already do quick
thoughts about the sudden influx of stories today.  I liked the Perfume
story even though it came in a weird order.  It has potential as a longer
piece, the ending is interesting I suppose.  Chapter 7, which came in last
btw, I thought was a good lemon scented tone.  It's apparant but in a
background way, it flows naturally in a comic way.  All and all I liked it
but wish it was longer, it seemed a bit rushed.
        Royal, I just skimmed it but it seems to follow Tofu heavier than
the rest.  Nice concept but not sure about the cast or the
characterizations but heck, not my story.  Would Kasumi even be in such a
game?  Oh well, I'm tired ignore me.
        In fact I'm very tired, goodnight people.

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