Mousse Lee wrote:

No wonder you're having problems completing it!  You're trying to
rewrite "Shogun" (one of my favorite books, btw).  The amount of stuff
you're trying to plot makes me tired just thinking about it.

        Same here, everything except "Shogun" as favorite book.  Replace
that with "Musashi" or that other book by Eiji Yoshikawa and yes I did
consider a Musashi inspired fanfic which I thankfully never started.
Everything seems fine right up until the conquering of Japan.  Really I
don't think it's important to actually script the battles waged in proper
military fashion.  If anything use bits from the Ancient Art of War as
basic stratagem.

I read Musashi.  An excellent book.  Huge tho.  It took me almost one-and-a-half 
weeks.



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