On Thu, 8 Aug 1996, Thomas R Jefferys wrote:

HO! NEW THOUGHT!
Begin at the beginning, but with revisions. Subtley alter Akane's behavior
so that the readers go *hmmmmmmm* (not *she's lesbian*, but *now why did
she do THAT?*); have her carefully probe Ranma-chan to see if he/she likes
her, working up to the point where she believes that Ranma-chan likes her
and she is about to reveal *her* true feelings, when she walks in on him in
the bathroom.

	Okay, this sounds good, but is going to take a lot of work.  
Don't expect to see the revision for several months.

SKJAM!