Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] Silent Partner
From: "Mike W. Loader" <mloader@scs.unr.edu>
Date: 8/8/1996, 2:16 AM
To: Fanfic ML

On Wed, 7 Aug 1996, Travis Butler wrote:

From:        Mike W. Loader, mloader@scs.unr.edu

  Funny how these things work.
  I originally wrote this in script format, as part of the second episode
of the Nameless Sequel. 

Hmmm. Well, it's probably just as well this isn't going into Nameless 
Sequel; I have a *very* hard time reconciling this portrait with the one 
in Nameless Original. If Nabiki were carrying around this kind of 
bitterness and resentment in Nameless Original, I would have expected it 
to come out when she was in her 'enhanced' state... and I don't remember 
even a hint of it. Not even in the scene where she ki-blasts Shampoo and 
Kodachi, and that's where I'd expect it to come out.

I have no idea where this came from. One second I was typing funny stuff,
and the next....*WHAM*...I'm staring at the screen wondering what posessed
me to write something that downbeat in the middle of a comedy piece.
   Suffice it to say that Silent Partner isn't set in the same "world" as
Nameless.
   The funny thing is that I still needed a Ranma/Nabiki confrontation
scene in Nameless, and so I went back in and rewrote it..it's actually
funny now, but still recognizable as the same scene.
 
Aside from that... a very disturbing portrait. I'm not sure if it was 
meant to be. <wry look> Something seemed... off, somehow, in a way I 
couldn't pin down. A little too gritty, perhaps, in its take on the 
world; heroin seems completely out of place in the Ranmaverse.

It wasn't meant to be anything, at first...*grin*...after I realised what
I had written, I pegged it as disturbing.

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