RANMA 1/2: Girls' Night Out
by Jeffrey Paul Hosmer
*Grammer:  8
*Story:  5  a yawner

	Well, at least I received good marks in grammer... I wonder how I 
did in grammar. :)  I'm sorry Piccolo didn't like the story, but I'm glad 
some people did.  In fact, most of the C&C I got on it was favorable.  I 
can hope to please everyone, but I know I never will... I just want to 
please enough people to get on the bestsellers' list. :) (A guy can 
dream, can't he? :)  I wonder, tho, what Piccolo thought of my other 
fanfics...

Jeffrey Paul Hosmer			rogue1@netcom.com
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