I updated Heart of the Family since I read the final version, the rest is new.

OPPORTUNITIES:  A RANMA 1/2 FANFICTION
by Parson
*Grammar: 6  I saw some typo errors.  Oh, the last part is called an epilouge not a prolouge.
*Characters: 6  The characters were handled nice, but they like to change their minds alot. 
*Story: 7  This is that, "solve everything in the Ranma universe" fic.
*Humor: 3
*Drama: 6
*Lemon: 0.5
*Overall: 6.8  If it's going to be this long, why don't you
develope the characters a little better?  The style is choppy, and
Nabiki is very evil in this fic.  Also, why is this part one?  Where
are the other parts?  Why'd did the author lable part one?  I think
this fic is completed, but why'd he put part one?

HOKUTO NO KEN '93
by Ray and Matt
*Grammar:  None.  This is an ASCII art fic.
*Characters: 8
*Story: 7 basic Fist of the N. Star story.
*Humor: 8  There is always humor in Fist of the N. Star!! And
this is one of them!
*Overall: 8 I love it; where are the other parts?

THE FANFIC FOR YOU!
by  I don't know yet
*Grammar: 7
*Characters: 8
*Story: 7
*Humor:6
*Overall: 8 Pretty nice, I didn't
like killing off Mousse though.  Oh, you're right, Akari is a
bad character that is used to get Ryouga off of Akane.

A DREAM TO GODAI FOR
by Bob Barbarian
*Grammar: 6
*Characters: 7  This was my first MI fanfic story I read.  And the
characters were very much like the ones in the manga.
*Story: 6 This could have been better without the lemon scene by
making her wake up in the middle of the kissing, and kicking Godai
out of his room.  Wait, that's been done.  Oh well.
*Humor: 4
*Lemon: 6
*Overall: 7  Since this is the first MI fic I read, I had nothing to
judge this against. So, it was pretty good.

BROTHER AND SISTER CHAPTER ONE
by ?
*Grammar: 7
*Characters: 6
*Story: 7
*Overall: 6  I don't know who she is, I don't know what's going on, but
hey it's the first chapter.

BUBBLEGUM EEK!
by Michael White
*Grammar: 6
*Characters: 8
*Story: 7  nice crossover
*Humor: 6  You tried to be funny, yet you failed on some parts
*Overall:  6.5  an ok crossover.  

VIDEO GIRL RANMA?
by  Robert Ja Kang
*Grammar:  7
*Characters:  6
*Story:  7  Good crossover.  Although I would have liked to see a new video
girl instead of Ai Amono.  But this is still good
*Humor: 4
*Lemon: 2
Overall: 8  I wonder if he's gonna finish this?

HEART OF THE FAMILY
By Richard Lawson
*Grammar:  7  Great, lacked flowidity(Is that even a word?)  though.  
*Story:  9  Very Nice
*Characters:  9  Travel through the mind of Kasumi and it was
very very good. This fanfic will be the basis of some my future
fanfics.
*Drama: 8
*Overall: 9  I have a pet peeve of mine, Japanese on minute, then English.
You should only write Japanese when you need it!!  I have no idea why
authors put okaasan, oneechan, or Baka.  Trying to show off your Japanese
or something?  Actually, oneechan is okay since there is no real English
term for that.

RIGHT SIDE OF THE LEDGER
by Richard Lawson
*Grammar: 8
*Story: 7
*Characters: 8
*Humor: 2
*Drama: 8  Maybe you should do a fanfic about the Kuno family next time.
*Overall: 8  Great use of Shakespeare, you sir are a master storyteller.  No
Japanese this time... good.

COLOGNE'S MAGIC MUSHROOMS
by Plunger
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 6  kinda dull
*Characters: 6
*Humor: 2
*Overall: 6