On Wed, 7 Aug 1996, Shannon and Tim Richmeyer wrote:

Oh, I don't mind editting it, I was just gripping a little.  It's sort of
fun, actually, just time consuming. ^_^

	Tita thought it was interesting to watch how the group settled. The
three men took the sofa. Hajime choose the over-stuffed chair to their
Hajime's right side. Jasmine had taken the second of the chairs that
faced the sofa, Elenora sitting beside her sisters feet on the large

		, and Elenora was 		sister's

and this was the Ryudo surname for twenty-two generations. Do you know
why it was changed?" She asked the brothers in general.

		       she

	"Hai." Hajime answered them. "At least, I think so."

	"Hai," Hajime replied.

	"I'll look forwards to it." Tsuzuku promised with a small, cryptic

				t," Ts

	Elenora shook her head no rapidly. "I really, want to hear this!"

					   "I really want to

	"Oh, thanks, Amaru." Owaru grumbled softly as he saw his oldest
brothers chiding look. "Yes, Elder Brother. I will read it all, as soon

  brother's

	"When we can. We also observe, record and when necessary, do what we

						d, when

can to thwart harmful paranormal activities. Thanks Elenora." She took

						hanks, Ele

	"Hey! We," she indicated herself and Jasmine, "have not be spying on
you! The Order has been observing your family. There is a big

The previous female speaker before this was Jasmine, so you need to modify
a little to indicate that the she is Elenora.

	"Hey!"  Elenora glared at [Amaru?  I deleted before I checked :].
"We," she indicated . . .

	"Elenora, that's enough." Jasmine's quite voice silenced her sisters

									ter's

	Elenora pressed her lips together and looked down at her clenched fists
on her knees. "They just don't understand." She said in a whisper.

					and," she said

	"I understand, Saint-Germain-san. It is just, uncomfortable, to think

don't use , for vocal spacing (someone told me that a while back because I
also used it :).  Change to - It is just . . . uncomfortable . . . to
OR perhaps - It is just, well, uncomfortable to think

	"One was killed by Tanaka Tamanji and the other by one of Dr. Tsukuba

Dr. Tsukuba's

augmented humans." Tita answered with a sad shake of her head.

	Jasmine had been observing the men while Tita took over. Shinkai was
leaning forwards and hanging raptly on each word, the Lieutenant

						rd.  The Lieu

apparently bemused and the Detective's body language was showing that he

was apparently bemused, and the

	*Bless you, little Dragon-king!* Tita thought as Amaru's acceptance of
the awareness of the Orders intrusion on their lives touched his brothers.

			rder's intrusion of

	He looked at each one of them. Shinkai-sempai restless as he waited to

						empai, restless

to go to war with the Gyushu. The Gyushu were thwarting the Emperor's
will in the Human Sphere and he wanted to Go Clan to stop them. The Blue

					 the Go Clan

	"It was a psychic battle." Tsuzuku offered.

				," Tsu

	"I will take this part, if you want, Elder brother." Tsuzuku offered.

							er," Tsu

Sugoi!  Explanations!  Ok, on to the next part. :)

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