A1C Charles Stitman wrote:

** High Priority **

I'd appreciate some C&C on this one. I've done a substantial rewrite on
the chapter, particularly near the end.
Any and all comments are welcome.

Thanx
Chaz

This might not be the C&C that you want, but it seems that you forgot to 
include some line-wraps on your document.  Its just scrolls... and 
scrolls... and scrolls... ^^;;

Jon

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