On Wed, 7 Aug 1996, Mr. the Rutsch wrote:
I liked the fic. A cool idea, although I wish the characters had more
depth, and I think the alternate reality was an unnecessary distraction
and too much like that thingy I'm writing about Nabiki. Plus it might've
been nice if the conversation was a little smoother.
Well, yes. Thus the (beta) tag. And the "alternate reality" was
the only way I could think of to get the situation I had in mind.
I dunnow. Ranma begs for this sort of thing, so it's great to see it
brought up. I'm willing to forgive any mistake to see something new &
different on the list. I am looking forward to more of this.
Maybe.
If I can actually get the story onto the Ranma/Kasumi relationship.
SKJAM!