[To be continued]

I certainly hope so! I liked the premise, your new
character is well-developed, and there's certainly
room for a series here...  I noticed a few mistakes
that can be hammered out, but it's 3 am, so I'm not
up to giving very detailed C&C... Nice work,
though, and I hope to see more! 

-CW

"When a great many people are unable to find work, unemployment 
results" - Calvin Coolidge, (Stanley Walker, City Editor, p. 131 (1934))