This part is pretty good.  However, I'm pretty sure that the Shishi 
Hokodan and Ranma's counter to it (can never spell it) are not Amazon 
techniques.  If you want to write that Ranma is coming from the Amazon society, 
you should have him use Hiryu Shoten Ha instead.

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"RANMA NO BAKA!" Akane Tendo, Ranma 1/2

"Power only breeds war ... I wish I'd never been born." Celes Chere, Final 
Fantasy 3

Don Wang <dwang@sprynet.com>
RPG, strategy game, and Ranma 1/2 fan.