At 03:04 AM 8/3/96 -0400, you wrote:

 Hello I'm a first timer on this so don't kill me. Anyways after reading 
too many fanfics out there, my mind decided to get rid of some of the idea 
inside my head.Even through this is a short intro I would like comments 
and what could be fixed up(I can think of a few my self).

I'd like to see more.  BTW the Hawk is a cool idea.  Idon't know if she's
just attack Ryoga like thay.  I figure she'd probably want to figure out
what was going on.  And I don't think that she would just walk away after
the fight. Maybe try to get some info from p-chan.

Ja ne!!

Ran-chan

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