Hello I'm a first timer on this so don't kill me. Anyways after reading 
too many fanfics out there, my mind decided to get rid of some of the idea 
inside my head.Even through this is a short intro I would like comments 
and what could be fixed up(I can think of a few my self).

                              BROTHER AND SISTER
   All rights belong to whoever owns them(Rumiko Takahashi) and can sue  
   me(Her lawyers and the companies). The rest belong to me.

** somebody is thinking

CHAPTER 1 
INTRO.

  It is a peaceful night in Nerima, the moon is shinning bright and there 
isn't a cloud in the sky. The place is a dark street with almost nobody in 
sight, except for one single store font, a fast food restaurant.

Vendor:(with a bored look) This sucks, why do  I have to be on shift on a 
night like this. *maybe if I'm lucky, some beautiful babe will come and reward 
me for enduring this misery*

  While the young vender is drooling, a lone figure approaches from out 
of nowhere. It a boy with a big backpack, umbrella, and is wearing a striped 
bandanna. The boy looks like he's been traveling for days. IT'S Ryouga.

Vendor:(with a even borer look) just my luck, the gods must hate me. Oh 
well don't look a gift horse in the mouth, a customer is a customer.

Vendor:(to the Ryouga) HEY THERE, you look weary, how about a nice meal 
to strengthen your body.*hope he has money*

Ryouga: No thanks, do you know where Nerima is?

Vendor: You're standing on it bub.

Ryouga: REALLY!!? I'm this close to the beautiful Akane Tendo. Oh how the 
this day have come for me to destroy you Ranma and win Akane heart!

Vendor:(with an uninterested look) OK, so how about a quick meal before 
your big date?*looser*

  As the two talk, another figure come from out of nowhere, walking pass 
the two and the restaurant.

Vendor:(with a bright look) Well woulda look at that, my angel of the 
night has come to lift me of this misery.*I thank the havens for this sight!*

 The figure is now a young beautiful girl with fiery red hair tied in a 
pigtail. She is wearing a red Chinese dress(DEVIL HUNTER KIND) with black 
pants under it, tied by a black piece cloth around her waist, matching chinese 
shoes, and golden wrist bands while carrying a backpack. All of which 
appears to be a fighter clothes and it shows her curves quite nicely too.

Ryouga:(turning to the girl) ................(big eyes look)

Vendor:(with a sly smile) Quite a babe huh?

Ryouga:(coming back to his senses) RANMA I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!!!!!! 
(charges at the girl)

Girl:(turning around) Huh?

Ryouga:(running towards the girl) I'LL HAVE MY REVENGE ON YOU RANMA!!

Ryouga brings a rapid amount of punches and kicks only to be dodged by 
the girl.

Girl:(while dodging) *he's pretty good*

Ryouga: I got you now!, BAKUSAI-TEN-KETSU!!!!

With that, Ryouga's finger touched the ground causing rocks to fly 
everywhere sending the girl flying back.

Girl:(getting up) Ouch!! *This guy knows the breaking point technique, 
...(thinks a bit more)...but must be stupid to use it in that way*

  From out of no where a hawk comes down and tries to grab Ryouga head. 
After much pain and struggling Ryouga grabs the hawk and throws it to the 
ground. The girl seeing this starts to get angry.

Girl:(very angry) YOU'LL PAY FOR THAT!!!! (starts to glowing blue)

All of a sudden she disappears and then reappears in front of a startle 
Ryouga.

Girl: SHINNU-RYOKENTSU-KEN!!!!(punching Ryouga)

The girl's glowing fist strikes into Ryouga's stomach, sending him flying 
back with a trail of energy. She then runs over to the hawk seening if it's 
all right.

Girl:(picking up the hawk) Oh Shinnu are you all right!!? Speak to me!

The hawk gets up and gives a screech. Then flies to around and land on her 
shoulder.

Girl:(looks at Ryouga's body then at the vendor) Do you know this guy?

The frighten vendor shakes his head rapidly.

Girl:(sighs) OK, then do you know where.......(takes out a piece of 
paper, looks at it, and then put it back)..the Tendo Dojo?

Vendor:(thinking) Tendo Dojo? Humm I think there's a dojo down that way 
(points in a direction)

Girl: Thank you(walks off in that direction)

Vendor:(sighs) This town gets weirder every day.*I got to get out of this 
town...maybe New York, it's much quieter there*(realizing something)..or 
was the dojo that way(points to another direction)

Not far down the street...

Girl:(thinking to her self)*humm, Ranma sure has powerful enemies* 
(chuckles) I can't wait to meet him.....(looks around, it's a dead end) 
(gets an angry look) I'm going to kill that guy!!!

screen fades