| Subject: Re: [FFML] PUCK - FILE ONE [ORIG] |
| From: phoenix@conch.aa.msen.com (Michael H Carlson) |
| Date: 7/29/1996, 7:05 PM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
Hey Twister, I like Puck. Just one thing, Twister (Darlene) seems to have a much more active prankish nature then Puck (Erik). While we see the joke at the beginning, we do not see him using his abilites to continue creating pranks. I think it would be better if you have him continue playing pranks on people. Other then that, it like the concept. Phoenix Ikki