Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML] [FANFIC] Battle For Akane's Soul Ch 1 beta
From: Chris Willmore
Date: 7/28/1996, 6:41 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

At 05:55 PM 28/7/96 -0400, you wrote:

Any hope this hits a cord with someone.  Please tell us what you think.

VERY nice. ^_^ I'm happy to find someone writing this sort of dark,
gloomy, weird fanfiction.

The only think I'd like to see added would be more description to the
gory parts. ;) Then again, that's just my personal taste...

Well done! I'd like to see more... And... Not necessarily a sequel...
The rest of the story would be nice. ;)

Here's what I got at the end owhen I tried to open the attached file:

Attachment Converted: c:\eudora\attach\RVSR2.TXT


	The day before....
r. The darkness enters. There it waits, watches, studies. With a
whisp:{

 

Well done!

-CW