| Subject: Marital Arts 5 Rev. (Ranma Lemon) Notes |
| From: polaris@interpac.net (Jon K. Hayashi) |
| Date: 7/25/1996, 7:21 AM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
Just a few minor changes. I think I added a little to the scene where everyone's in the living room. I also turned Gosunkugi into a guy who can only get excited looking at pictures or through his camera. Most of the rest is just cleaning up the english. JK