Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF] The Ways of the Amazons: Thy Inward Love : Aftermath
From: Sebastian Weinberg
Date: 7/22/1996, 12:12 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
CC: sterman@sprynet.com



On Sun, 21 Jul 1996, Ben L. Harrison wrote:

More please ;)

Ditto.  You could have the politics in the background as Shampoo (Xian Po)
feels her way around her new position,  or you go for political suspense.

Isn't it sad?

Whenever people like something, they ask for more of the same.  I don't 
think that this storyline can be taken any further than this, but that 
doesn't stop them.

Now, what I'd *really* like to see is (Richard, you listening?) a piece 
that deals with Kodachi in the aftermath of TIL.  She was carted off 
pretty fast and never got a chance to have a "happy ending" of her own.  
Now, I wonder...  In, say, ten years time she will be leaving the asylum 
(or is that a sanatorium?  "Asylum" sound so much like "Containment instead 
of healing") as a mentally scarred, but sane woman in her mid-twenties.  
To see her find back into a life that she left ten years ago as a 
different person, see her find out what turns the others' lives have 
taken, would be highly interesting.

I'm just throwing this at you, you know?  If you don't like it, just 
throw it back and perhaps I'll write it myself in a different context.  
It just seemed to me that Kodachi was the only character who was removed 
quickly without much character development in TIL. (OK, Souun didn't get 
any, either :)


Sebastian
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