At 05:03 AM 7/20/96 -0700, you wrote:

*fanfic and foreward snipped*

This is one of the best fanfics I've read in a LONG time. I'm impressed
at the depth of the story. Dry, with little humor, but a VERY involving story.

I suggest you turn this into a fanfic SERIES. There is a LOT of potential
for a politically centered Ranma series starring Xian Pu, Mu Zhu, Ranma,
and Akane-- and the future generations of these two families. I'd offer
to write it myself, except my writing is not very good; I wouldn't want
to ruin a good concept like this.

No way, man.  Do you realize how boring that would turn out?
Sometimes, ya just gotta know when to stop writing.  And I think
this is a perfect place to stop.  Kinda makes you wonder whether
or not Shampoo will succeed and kind of makes you shake at the
idea of Shampoo changing the world.  I like it. =)

signed, phoneynt
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