On Sat, 13 Jul 1996 04:00:22 -0400 (EDT) Hibiki Ryoga said:

:
: Short, mostly concept story.  Wrote it tonight over the course of 2.5
: hours, mostly while eating dinner and attempt to keep Nuku-Nuku (my grey
: tabby kitten) from eating my dinner instead of hers (are cats SUPPOSED to
: like pasta that much??)  So forgive any spelling / etc errors.  And any
: C&C which doesn't need to go to the list, please send to
: loki@dragoncat.net or ranma@eskimo.com, since I get considerably les
: e-mail on those accounts and won't have to wade through FFML stuff to find
: C&C on my story.  :)
: ------

: RANMA NIBUNNOICHI: Reflections on a Life

I liked it, but it was definitely too short.  You'll have to spin
this out a lot more, otherwise it just looks like an original,
unrelated story that's pasted into the middle of a Ranma frame.
Perhaps show more of Keiko's and Hiroshi's life;  Some parallels
that clue us in on their relation to the future Ranma and Akane.

As for Kasumi as the mage, I can't really say I like the idea, but
that's just me - there's nothing *wrong* with it.  (Do you really
think she has any *free time*?)


Sebastian
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