BGC- BEAT OF DEFIANCE II

Chapter 3

I am *so* sorry it took me so long to get back to you about this.

With that in mind, the <comma> police are on vacation today.  (In other
words, I didn't feel like marking them) <g>

I'm rather interested to see just what the bad guys are going to be up to ;)

"Just were did you come up with that theme
anyhow?"

...Just where did...

Nene looked relieved at the change of subject.  "From an old Anime
series.  I'm surprised that you didn't recognize it, it was popular in
the U.S. as well as here.  

Not popular enough, according to Bandai  ; )

"I want you to delay
the rest of Tina's test until after she as had a good nights sleep and
a follow up exam by me."

...good night's sleep...

"I'm fine Angel.  I can ..."  Tina trailed off as she saw her friends
eyes flash sapphire.

...saw her friend's eyes...

It's popularity was due to the "curbside service"

Its

Nene sounded slightly miffed.  "She wont tell me either, Tina.  She

won't

* Well if they can get use to it so
can I *

...can get used to it...

Another difference was she still had
folding wings mounted on the back, just like the others.

How can she *still* have wings if it's a difference from the Defiance suit?

Tina had shifted her vision to the
ultraviolet range, were often contrasts were different that the normal
visual range. 

....ultraviolet range, where often....

Sylia showed a rare smile when the others came out of the change
room.  Once the story was over though she was back to business.

Why is Sylia smiling if the others haven't told her the story yet?

Although I
must admit some of the R&D corporations that you family controls
have begun to explore areas I find most interesting."

...that your family controls...

Nene  bring up the new display
listed in you menu.

...listed in your menu.

Based on her fathers
public record, she knew she could trust his judgement.

...her father's public record...

"Look, if I
hadn't joined you'all would you had any clue about my family
secret?"

....would you have had any clue...

BTW - where I come from it's  y'all  <g>

What if I accentually set off a
round?"

accidentally

"None of the systems work until the arming code is imputed. 

inputted    or  input

The
only way you could harm someone is to punch or kick them, and you
are to much in control of yourself to do that."

...you are too much in control...

"OK Boss, you've shown me the guns, lets go kill some targets."

let's

* And it will give me a better idea on how you think
Tina. *

...idea of how...

Nene, you are to busy trying to counter it, as you most likely will

too busy

"She and Priss did a lot of damage before Linna arrived, and that
was with no expearence working together. 

experience





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