On Sat, 13 Jul 1996 15:27:31 -0500 Richard Lawson said:

: Having finished the exhausting task of rewriting TIL, I now want to move
: on to my next story.  I'm putting a lot of work into something I'm not
: getting compensated for.  :)
:
: I'd like your opinion.  I have three story ideas mulling around in my
: head...
:
: 1)  TIL side story:  Kuno and Nabiki's prom night.


: 2)  TIL Aftermath:  Shampoo's return to the Amazons.

: 3)  Completely new story.
: A study, if you will, comparing the
: "normal" universe to the Ranmaverse.

: So, whaddya think?  Which story would you like to see?

I hold you to be a very intelligent person, so I won't insult you
by spelling out the obvious.  I'll just tell you *in what order*
you should write them in my opinion. :)

2 - 3 - 1

I really like all the character development that you devoted to
this character who was little more than an annoying bimbo in the
original.  I'd love to see more of the characters that Shampoo and
Mousse have become under your guidance.  The story you suggest as
number two intrigues me.

The same thing goes for the third one, which would almost made the
first place, if I hadn't just re-read TIL.  If anyone can pull
this off realistically, you can.

The first of your suggested stories *has* to be written, simply
because there are too few good lemons out there.  "Good" meaning
in my book "focused on the *impact* that the sexual situation has
on the characters, not on the sex itself."  I doubt that you would
write it any other way.


Sebastian
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