At 12:49 AM 7/9/96 +0000, you wrote:

dang you shure just flooded us with fanfic.

I try my best.  ^_-

what I have read so far was pretty good.  not to mention some of the 
best lemon I have seen in a while.

Thanks.  I've always considered myself to be a hentai, so I guess I just
wrote down what I usually think about (when I'm not thinking about life in
general...)

Dont tell me that this whole 
thing is a reworked story though its far too large.

It is indeed a re-write.  I suggest hitting Zoner's site and pulling down
"the kidnapping."  You'll recognize the content, and quickly tell just how
much time I've spent on this thing...

at what point did you deviate from the original?

 
I really deviated at the first paragraph, if you want to get technical.  In
terms of the plot, things didn't really start to pull away from the original
story until the scene with Graven and Benten.  In the original version
Graven (then called Zed) raped Benten, then turned to Lum and started in on
her.  Very poor taste, IMHO.  Plus, Oyuki's inclusion in the story was a
completely original idea on my part.  A very necessary inclusion as far as
I'm concerned.  ^_^
  

anyway I think that you probably did have much too much time on your 
hands, but hey now thats a job I think that I could get into.

Yeah... It was a shame that AT&T laid me off last September (four days after
my birthday).  I really liked that job.

anyway nice work and dont stop writning.

Thanks!



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