At 03:54 PM 7/9/96 -0400, you wrote:

that's strange, when i first saw this story
it had a part where shinobu gives ataru a 
...uh...anyways, it's not here!

either that or my mail client's doing funny
stuff to me...

Your eyes weren't deceiving you.  A previous version of TPATL did have the
Shinobu-Ataru BJ scene in it (right after Shinobu and Mendou finished up on
the Widow, when Ataru walks in on them), but I decided to excise that
because I rather wanted Lum to be Ataru's first experience.  I believe that
my editor agreed with me on that one, too.

BTW, what did you think of the way I rewrote the undressing scene with
Shinobu and Mendou during the party?




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