At 04:43 PM 7/9/96 +0000, you wrote:

At 03:54 PM 7/9/96 -0400, you wrote:

that's strange, when i first saw this story
it had a part where shinobu gives ataru a 
...uh...anyways, it's not here!

either that or my mail client's doing funny
stuff to me...

Your eyes weren't deceiving you.  A previous version of TPATL did have the
Shinobu-Ataru BJ scene in it (right after Shinobu and Mendou finished up on
the Widow, when Ataru walks in on them), but I decided to excise that
because I rather wanted Lum to be Ataru's first experience.  I believe that
my editor agreed with me on that one, too.

make sure you also excise megane's smartass comments afterwards since
they have no bearing anymore.

BTW, what did you think of the way I rewrote the undressing scene with
Shinobu and Mendou during the party?

signed, phoneynt
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