At 03:54 PM 7/9/96 -0400, you wrote:

that's strange, when i first saw this story
it had a part where shinobu gives ataru a 
...uh...anyways, it's not here!

either that or my mail client's doing funny
stuff to me...

i looked it over and can't find it.
yet there is the part where megane
says to ataru, "I know what you and
shinobu did!"

Considering Ataru didn't do anything
in this ver...

if you add it, make sure you take out
the part when lum is giving him the
hand-job and he thinks about never having
felt anything like this blahseblahseblah.

you say you base this off your own experience.

if it's really that good, all i can say is,
wow.  i'll be all jumpy like a kid on christmas
eve.

signed, phoneynt
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