Ok; I suppose I should have reposted everything together - that's what
comes of impatience :) -- I intended to wait until the travesty that is Ch 3
was fixed, but people have asked and as I need to repost in separate files in
any case ...
Just a couple of things pertaining to Ch 3 that I forgot to mention:
Someone (not on the FFML) has commented concerning Priss's excessive
language in this. I must say here that I *abhor* such language and find it
personally *very* offensive (one reason for so many letters replaced by *s) -
one of the reasons I am so unhappy with Priss's portrayal in Ch 3. I'm also
not particularly impressed with Nene's portrayal at the club.
Ok, on with the rest of DC.
The files *must* be read in the correct order (save for Ch 3) to
understand what is going on. The foreword should be first, followed by
preludes 1, 2 & 3, followed by chapters 1 & 2 (& 3 :) ) then the afterword.
For those who have already read it, only the foreword and afterword
and a few notes have changed, but if you intend to keep it you might want to
ditch the original large file for these (particularly if you intend to keep up
with the latest version as there's no point in my continually reposting
unchanged bits (probably the best way to annoy a great many people :) )).
The rest should follow this, and yes, (7) is missing (it is Ch 3 :) ).
Enjoy (I hope) and any comments will be more than welcome.
Craig
PS. I've set `Reply-To:' both to my address and the list. I hope this
causes no problems.