I thought this was good, too. Loved seeing stuff develop between Ranma
and Ukyo.
The only major problem I had is...why? Why?
Why did Ukyo pretend to be Ranma, and Ranma pretend to be Ukyo? What
did it gain them? This was never explained, and it drove me absolutely
bonkers.
I also wish Biles would write a non-"radio script" type of story. I
think he could write a wonderful "regular" story, where he could explore
in greater detail the thoughts and feelings of his characters. I think
the script format limits this to some extent.
Keep up these reviews, Gaffney. I'm using them to guide my leisure time
reading. Now, if only I could find some more leisure time....