Subject: Re: [FFML] [Story] CS
From: Jack Ji
Date: 7/6/1996, 1:43 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


On Sat, 6 Jul 1996, Philip Mak wrote:

Preview of part X: Broken hearts or how about a feud?

Hmm... I'd prefer feud. :) Don't like broken hearts that much.

Well, actually, it wasn't a choice question there. :) You see, there are 
these cards games card "Hearts" and "Feud." Well, you'll see in part X.

I'm glad you decided to scrap the previous ending of the story..
All in all, a pretty good part. Maybe they will find out that Ryouga has 
the bottle with Ranma's chi in it next part. And then when Ryouga finds 
out what it is maybe he won't give it back to Ranma so they can fight or 
something :)

Yeah, I'm going with my original ending again. I just can't stay 
depressed for too long. Which means the shishi hokodan isn't going to 
work too well for me. ^_-

Uh, I haven't really thought of a good way to 
restore Ranma yet. All I can think of is like Ryouga hands the bottle 
over to someone (probably Akane) to ask them if they know what it is (or 
in Akane's case, it's a gift of some sort) and then Akane gives it to 
Jack to free up the chi. I dont' know, I kinda wanted to avoid a fight... 
                            
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