Only really scanned it, but I am wondering.  Would Akane use Ryouga as a 
bargaining chip?  She seems too nice to do that.  Since you say there isn't much of a 
plot element in here, I'll skip my usual C & C on plot relevance and characterization.  
Still, can't imagine Ryouga and Kodachi at the end.  As far as I know, they haven't been 
even in the same story.  


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"RANMA NO BAKA!" Akane Tendo, Ranma 1/2

"Power only breeds war ... I wish I'd never been born." Celes Chere, Final Fantasy 3

Don Wang <dwang@sprynet.com>
RPG, strategy game, and Ranma 1/2 fan.