Subject: Re: [C&C] BGZ 9
From: jhedge@waterw.com (Jeanne Hedge)
Date: 7/6/1996, 2:35 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Bryan K. Ogawa wrote:
On Fri, 5 Jul 1996, Bert Van Vliet wrote:

[...]
Anyhow, just a note to let everyone know that Episode #9 of the Bubblegum
Zone is completed!  I have sent WW a copy to hack into appropriately-sized
[...]

ARgh!  I'm *finally* finished reading this monster!

-rw-------  1 bkogawa  guest   945522 Jul  5 19:00 zone9.txt  
                              ^^^^^^
Gaah!  Gah!  Gah!

It's huge!  It's gigantic!  It's ...

pretty good. :)

I have to say that reading this was pretty exhausting.  Skyknight's
adventures were pretty dark, although that's been the trend, huh?.  I'm
not going to make line by line specific C&C -- somehow, I think that doing
that would really spam the list, and might take me longer than a day. :)

<Rest of message snipped>

I have my own thoughts on the subject, but out of curiousity is there
anything that stands out as good, bad, confusing, funny,
supposed-to-be-funny-but-isn't, etc?


Jeanne Hedge

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