Overall this is pretty decent, howver I have some problems with a couple of
spots. 1st off, why were Ranma and Akane having sex? It would take something
pretty drastic to get them to take that step in their relationship. And once it
happened I really don't think Akane would really turn to Royga like that,
especially after having sex with Ranma.

Just remember in Rei Rei everything works out in the end. 

Penty