Subject: Re: [FFML] [BGC Fanfic] Starry Eyes
From: Thomas Kinnen
Date: 7/4/1996, 10:34 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com




At 11:36 PM 7/3/96 -0400, you wrote:

    Well, not much is changed, but I figured I'd repost this now that
people are C&C-ing again.

.........

W/o further ado (well, the final version will be formatted better, currently
I'm just copying from Ami Pro):

.........

	Just as the boomer started to fall, the man behind her jumped forward,
pushing her onto the ground, and out of the path of a plasma blast. The tree
she was using for cover had a large hole through it and the path of the
plasma blast could be seen going through at least four trees beyond. She
rolled over and dropped to one knee, facing the man, her right arm leveled
at him. "Shit!" Her electronically filtered voice screamed through the
loudspeakers. "Who the hell are you?"

I don't see how he could push over someone in a hard suit that easy....

Tom


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