I hate comments like I am about to make....when you are sitting in a 4th
year Creative Writing course and all somebody says is "I liked it...it's
nice." I always wanted to throttle them (this went for the 2nd and 3rd
year courses as well) but sometimes it (the piece) deserves something
very much like that as the story itself blanks out any technical bits...
so....

 I really like this....or rather REALLY like ths!!!!!
 Something about it (as a whole) captures that wistful fary-tale quality
which shows up in Sailor Moon (yes, even in the hacked up dubs) but here
it really shines....
 I don't mean to be to full of praise... but the story caught me in the
beginning and won't let me go....


                                     Neil

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