I have no patience. First I was going to wait until I had a few chapters
done before I released anything. Then I was going to wait until I had the
first chapter done before I released it. Now I'm going to release what
I've written so far. I just can't hold it back any longer. ^_^

NANI?  The paragraph above implies that this is just a FRAGMENT of the
first chapter...  and this sucker is 54K.  What kind of epic are you
writing?  ^_^

Yeesh!  Zen will have to clear some hard drive space for this one, he can tell.

Anyway, Zen will offer some more comments when he has had time to actually
read it.  The premise sounds interesting enough - should make for a
comfortable evening's diversion.

More later-

Zen-

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