This is good for a "very alpha" version.
Only one thing really bothers me. I just don't believe Ranma could kill
Cologne in cold blood. Yes, he's mad about his daughter, but he has her
beaten and bloodied in front of him. I just don't think he'd turn into
a murderer, no matter what the provocation. My personal opinion, of
course.
Very little lemon here. Quite a change of pace from the "lemon-fest" of
Part 6. :)
Where do you go from here? It seems all you've got left is the boring
descriptions of families being raised. Unless you're planning on doing
a "Ranma/Cosby" crossover. :)
I must say, I think your writing has improved tremendously. This is a
much better written piece than your earlier fics, especially the first
couple. Keep it up!
And please do write more!!
:)