The opening paragraph is particularly nice, though Zen would like to echo
the request of one person who posted earlier on the list - where large text
blocks are concerned, please to add a blank line between paragraphs.  It
breaks up the blocks and makes it a little easier to read.

So much for the criticism...  as for the comment,

Lovely descriptive prose...  Really well done.  Now.  Where is the rest of
it, eh?  Where?

Zen will be waiting.  ^_^


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