Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML] [FanFic] Kasumi Ponderings...
From: "Mike W. Loader" <mloader@scs.unr.edu>
Date: 6/29/1996, 11:39 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Heh. Loved it. A nice parody of the "Kasumi-the-allknowing-saint" stories,
and well written to boot.
   You might consider expanding it, adding more material. Or maybe not; it
works well as a short, too.

       "Hello? Tendo residence."
       "Just what _is_ Protoculture?"
       "Minme, I explained this yesterday." Kasumi pointed out gently.
       "One more time?" the singer asked hopefully.
       "Alright, Protoculture is...."

Minmei is incapable of remembering concepts more complex than tying one's
shoe. :)
   I don't think (IMHO) that Kasumi would use "Alright", it's a bit to
informal and sloppy for her. Maybe "All right", or "Okay".

Hope to see more works from you. :)

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle, in backlog to the nth degree.
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