Heh. Loved it. A nice parody of the "Kasumi-the-allknowing-saint" stories,
and well written to boot.
You might consider expanding it, adding more material. Or maybe not; it
works well as a short, too.
"Hello? Tendo residence."
"Just what _is_ Protoculture?"
"Minme, I explained this yesterday." Kasumi pointed out gently.
"One more time?" the singer asked hopefully.
"Alright, Protoculture is...."
Minmei is incapable of remembering concepts more complex than tying one's
shoe. :)
I don't think (IMHO) that Kasumi would use "Alright", it's a bit to
informal and sloppy for her. Maybe "All right", or "Okay".
Hope to see more works from you. :)
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