Subject: [fanfic] Warped Reality V 8.01
From: "skywise" <kschultz1@isd.net>
Date: 6/26/1996, 8:26 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com, stargaze@world.std.com (wayne d pillion)
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kschultz1@isd.net

hello all do you think that if you have time that you could C+C this 
for me?  It is my first fic and also my first realy dark section.  I 
will probably need practice with that if I want to go where I want to 
with this.  Also anything that you can think of that would make this 
more interesting please feel free to tell me about.  ps is "he" to 
blatent or is the information amount ok.  you should all probably be 
able to geuss who it is but It should still feel just a little bit 
erie. thanks Skywise


Warped Reality 8.01

[ ] thoughts
< > Japanese speech
" "  English speech



 < I told you not to come back.> the shadowy form said as it
descended the stairs.  < It is all your fault that I am living in a
slow torturous hell without hope for salvation.  For your crimes
against me I will kill you Ryoga, do not think that you can hide
behind Akane this time.  Now I will have my revenge.>

 Hearing the slow deliberate speech, Ami and Con got quickly 
to their feet, the flat cold tone of voice devoid of all life scaring
them more than the fact that they were most likely about to die at his
hands.  

"Run Ami" Conrad cried as he charged up the stairs, [ hopefully she
will be able to get away before he finishes with me.]   A sharp pain
in his side dissipated all hope of that as he fell back the two feet
he had managed to travel.  looking down at his chest he wondered why
there was a thin piece of metal standing upright just a few inches
from his face.  With that thought the shock caught him an plunged him
deep into unending darkness, the light no longer even a distant memory
of the past.  

 Through her pain hazed view Ami looked back as Conrad 
screamed out her name.  < Noooo!> she screamed knowing that it 
was already too late.  Bolting back to Con she watched as he fell, the
puzzled look on his face tearing her heart out as she saw the dagger
imbedded in his chest.  She got four more steps before her legs were
entangled by something metallic and heavy.  She hit the ground hard no
more than three feet from Conrad but they might have been a mile
apart.  Her vision spinning she reached out towards him hoping to do
something, anything but knowing that it was already too late.  He
would die and she would soon follow.  

um does this qualify as a dark fic?
just wondering because I haven't written a dark portion of a fic yet
and I really want to know what you all think about this.  please C+C

shade and sweet water 
skywise
kschultz1@isd.net
wschultz@randolph.spa.edu
Warped Reality