hi i rewrote this part to make it better I hope that if you have the 
original one you will like this better.  if you didnt read the 
original that hey what a good time for you to start :)
I will now set forth to you a little bit of a teaser 
within a fanfic.

 Skywise wschultz@randolph.spa.edu


Warped reality v 6.01 

 Laroshovick was suddenly brought out of his meditations when 
one of the wards he had set went off.  [ Its happened again, can it be
possible that the gates have actually been reawakened?  this is
serious I better warn Yev]  Having reached a decision the young golden
haired boy got up and walked down the hall.  Passing though a large
pair of ruby studded doors he entered the private chambers of
Yevegety, high prince and overlord of all Aolorin.  
 <Hello brother, I have very important news.> Laroshovick continued
despite the glare that his brother leveled on him for his unbiden
arrival.  <I have detected the activation of what may be a gate.>

 Instantly Yevegety forgot his anger.  < Are you certain, could the
rebels have found a gate?>

 < Yes there is no mistaking  the power that I felt> returned
 Laroshovick, 
his brilliant green eyes flashing in outrage that he would be
questioned on such a matter.  < It is the second time that a gate has
been discharged in two weeks.  The first was almost unnoticeable, the
power involved was not enough to move more than one person and even
then only one or two threads though the weave.  I was not certain that
it was not just an echo of power from the past.  This discharge
however is definite.  Someone here is utilizing a gate to move beings
through the tapestry, I detected a greater power surge, much too large
to be an echo but still to faint for me to pinpoint a location. there
was enough power involved to transporting someone across at
 least one hundred threads.  Although that may not seem like much it
 shows that 
they are learning to control it.  We must not let them learn of its
true power.>

 < If it is the rebels and they have a working gate, I agree, we must
 kill 
them before they learn how to use it properly.>  Yev replied.  < I
want you to start a search, this new gate must be found or our power
could be threatened.>

 < At once my prince> said Laroshovick immediately jumping up to obey
Yevegety's demand, eager to please his powerful brother knowing full
well what had happened to the last unfortunate soul that had lost the
favor and protection of the High prince.  If that happened even he,
the most powerful practitioner of the sorcery could be brought down
and eaten alive by the ever-present pack of jackals itching to get
closer to the high prince and a chance at real power.  

Well I hope that this teaser helps you all understand what's
happening, but if you don't that's OK too.  Please give me some C+C on
this part as well as the previous 5. In case you were wondering I
decided that for once the high and mighty prince would have a simple
unimpressive name.  in this case Tim, if you can think of a less
imposing one feel free to tell me about it. I just was tired of people
with names like Gorthag and Rogath and so on. whee I changed my mind
in this the second draft I reverted to some more accepted impressive
sounding names.  and btw the name for their land was created by random
keystrokes and throwing vowels in where it seemed right what a way to
do things :)


shade and sweet water 
skywise
kschultz1@isd.net
wschultz@randolph.spa.edu