Subject: Re: [FFML] Ranko 1/2
From: Ken Arromdee
Date: 6/24/1996, 11:44 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

You should be a little more careful about the hot and cold water.  I saw two
spots here where the temperature of the water was wrong.
Eeep!  Where are they?

Whoops.  One spot.  Here it is:

:        advice.  Perhaps... we could splash him with cold water.
:        That would make it pretty impossible to ignore Ranko.